Vappingo Reviews

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Our proofreaders and copy editors love to receive feedback about any of the services they have provided.

If you have anything you would like to share with us, please get in touch. Of course, we love to receive praise, but if there's something you think we can improve upon, please don't be shy and drop us a line. We take all feedback seriously and continually endeavor to ensure that our customers get the service they are looking for (and more).

We're very proud of the fact that we have a lot of happy users. Here's a selection of some of the feedback our proofreaders and editors have received:

June 2019

thank you Emma, excellent work as usual from you. Franklin


Thanks to Emma, the editor! (Sorry for late feedback – I have been busy elsewhere.)


Thank you so much!! Thank you. This was one of the student file. I shared it without reading it. Thank you for pointing out the mistakes.


Perfect. Thanks much!


Great work, Emma. Thank you again! Excellent work, as always!


Thank you, Emma, for all your effort and topnotch services. Cheers S


Dear Emma Thank you and I appreciate it. Regards Mohammed


Love you Emma! Thanks a million always! :D


The job was completed well before the deadline time. All corrections made sense and they were clearly presented.


Emma, as great as usual, you never disappoint me with your work. I will always prefer you to edit all my future works. Excellent job!


surprised, positively


Emma, You are a star!


I really love the way Emma edit my draft! Thanks so much once again!


Thank you so much for this great job and your last clarification.


This is awesome!! Thanks for you help!!!


Emma was extremely quick and helpful. I am happy with the overall experience and the quality of the work.


Perfect !!! Love Vappingo :) Can't thank you enough for all the amazing help; such flawless services. Thank you! Cheers S


Excellent work, as always :) Thank you so much!


will you be available in these coming days? I need to place new order but I want to make sure that you will manage it


I really like the feedback. Well worth it. Thank you! –Dave


I have learned a lot from this rewriting. Thanks so much.


sure, I will place new order now. this is the first time that I find writer who paraphrase the document WITHOUT change the meaning of the content THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU


Thank you - great work, as always!!


May 2019

I am so satisfied that I will move from the company I have used for the pass 5 years that I will send all my proof reading to your company. Emma you did such a wonderful job. I love it. The other company I had them proof read it and I did not like what they did for me. I even told them how I felt and they did it again even the second time your one time gets a AAAAA ++++++ Thanks Emma I want you as my Editor. Jeff S Beck


Thanks Emma for always doing a great job! You have done an excellent job. Thanks so much. I will definitely submit more essays. :)


Excellent service, as usual. Will be placing more orders very soon. Thank you so much, Emma :) P.S Gave Vappingo a 5-star rating at Trustpilot today. Regards Serien


Thanks so much Emma! A pretty high-quality works you have done for this paper; brilliant understanding in data science and using professional terms/concepts to clarify the paper. With all the confusion I truly appreciate how quickly you finished my paper and for the email.


Excellent rewrite, Emma !! I so appreciate this... have used the service a couple of times before and I’ve never been disappointed. Amazing work ! I’ll come back for more shortly... have a few more paragraphs from the same essay to be edited. Thank you. Cheers S


Thank you Emma! Hi Emma, Thanks a lot for your work. They are wonderful! Best regards, Fiona


Excellent! Thanks, Elmer


Hi Emma, Thank you for helping me clean up my cover letter! Much appreciated! -Mike


I am fortunate to have Emily edit my work. Thank you so much, Emily! Jeff


Hi Emma, Thank you for doing such a great job on the rewrite. I like the results. I am very happy with the outcome of my report, thank you so much!


Hi Emma, Thank you for your work. I appreciate what you did with my review. I have two remarks. What do you think about writing "It is an easy read, informative book." Also, at the end of the first paragraph, can I say territories instead of buildings? The construction of cities was intricately connected with the community's culture, and I would like to emphasize this point. I don't want to give the impression that the author talks only about the technical aspects. Many greetings, Imane.


April 2019

Dear Emma Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate. It has been a great pleasure to share these moments with you through the articles I write and you help me to improve. Know that I always tell everyone that the end result of my work is a team effort. You are part of this team. They have many articles planned for the next six months and I hope we can continue with this partnership because I really like your work. I want to believe that we are going to make this year one of my biggest desires. My first book! And having you as an editor will be a special experience. kind regards Ana Mendes


Fantastic work, Emma! I'm so glad I found Vapinggo! Thank you, thank you, thank you!


March 2019

Dear Sirs, Thank you very much for a great job. Kind regards, SN


I am pleased and plan to use your services again. Thank you. thank you


Thanks) Hi Emma, Thank you very much with the rewriting. I was surprised and glad to see how better the essay became! There is one thing I want to check with you though. I added the deleted paragraph to give an excuse for my bad grades in undergraduate time, by saying I trained other skills during the time. Do you think it is redundant? Thanks Leah


February 2019

Dear Emma, I highly appreciate for your comments. Your work is impressive! Anyway, kindly please advise if this essay is strong enough for the scholarship and does it answer the question precisely? Thank you in advance. <3 Best regards PRAEW


I am very satisfied with Emma's work. Thank you!


Dear Vappingo Essay Editors: Thank you so much for the rewritten document. I am delighted with the results. We may close this project. Sincerely, Jim


Thank you very much for your help! I am very satisfied with your work and will definitely comeback for my future writings!


Thank you so much, love you!


Thanks Emma, for the awesome rewrite. I'll work on your excellent comments and revert back to you. Regards, Subrat


I LOVE EMMA! I admire your expertise! THANKS SO MUCH!


I'm thankful that I've stumbled upon your services. It was helpful to have my writing be more focused. I like how I was also given back a tracked version of the work.


Dear EMMA, Thank you so much madam, you have absolutely no idea how much you have helped me.


January 2019

BEST EVER!!! I'd love to tip $100 extra if i could get admitted!


Thanks a lot! I am really happy and satisfied with the result. Great service.


The writer did an amazing work. I will come back for more orders soon. Thank you.


I DO LOVE Vappingo!


Everything is just perfect! I will fill in the areas in the brackets accordingly according to what job I'm applying for.


December 2018

This is perfect. Thank you.


Thanks Emma for the excellent work:) Highly appreciated. Regards, Tariq


Emma has always been the best in editing my work. No words to describe the excellent job in the essay she revised. Awesome!


I am always happy with your work. Thank you.


Oh, my gosh. I swear that I am very much satisfied with your writing! I will come back to you later! I promise that I will be your regular customer! Thank you very much!!!!!!


Emma, Thank you very much. Excellent! Elmer


Thanks a lot Emma, Best Regards, Bulut


Thank you Emma, you always do an excellent job! I wish you can help me with all my future editing. Thanks again


November 2018

Dear Emma, 

Thank you a lot for your smart contribution on my applications. 

Best, 
Nouran

Cover letter rewritten
November 2018


Wow. Thank you very much! Though I've just opened the file now, I noticed that it's been emailed to me about 8 hours away from the deadline, wow.

Application letter edited
November 2018


Really great work, Emma. I am completely satisfied with the outcome. Thank you for your explanation. I liked your work.

Personal statement edited
November 2018


Dear Sophie, Thank you! It was better than what I expected! Wish me good luck during my visa application process ;) Thank you again. Regards, Elaheh

Visa application rewritten
November 2018


Alyssa, I cannot thank you enough! I absolutely appreciate your time and love the changes that were made. I just have one issue, I paid for the academic document but should have selected statements of purpose/application essays/personal statements. I am going to call Vappingo to fix this, I apologize for not catching this earlier. After doing the calculations for the correct order, I owe about $10.00 again my apologies, I will try my best to fix this.

Personal statement rewritten
November 2018


And I've read the file and also read the markups and I'm very very very satisfied. Thank you Alyssa, thank you Vappingo!

Statement of purpose edited
November 2018


Thank you so much! I'm very pleased with the editing, comments, advice. I couldn't have thought it would be so insightful and well-made in such a short period of time. Thank you for wonderful work!! Excellent Job Alyssa:)

Statement of purpose edited
November 2018


October 2018

Good rewriting.

Thanks.

Academic paper rewritten
October 2018


Dear Emma I would like to thank you for your attention and support. My last article has received many good comments, and I am very happy that everyone has understood my message. And I'm sure your support has contributed a lot to this achievement. Thank you very much I appreciate! Kind regards Ana Mendes

Blog post rewritten
October 2018


Great job Sophie. Thank you. Thanks a lot. I am very satisfied with the work you did for me. This is my first time using vappingo and I am very*10 satisfied with the result! Thank you for your efforts Sophie :) Regards, Daeun

Academic paper rewritten
October 2018


This is perfect. Thanks for sending it back so quickly. A happy customer.

Personal statement rewritten
October 2018


Looks awesome, thank you very much Laura!

Essay edited
October 2018


True professional work. I liked that the editor maintained my ideas but took the liberty to add new sentences to clarify them. The editor understood well the topic, the idea, and maintained my style of writing. Thanks and till next job.

Statement of purpose edited
October 2018


I'm extremely pleased with how the edited draft turned out. I definitely plan to use your services again as I refine my letters :)

Recommendation letter edited
October 2018


Thanks for your help. I would like to make some modifications, but overall it was very helpful and I would definitely use the service again.

Statement of purpose edited
October 2018


Dear Emma Thank you for your support. I liked and I am very satisfied with your support. I wish you a nice day. Kind regards Ana Mendes

Blog post rewritten
October 2018


Thank you, Emma! I've never expected that many changes could be made to drastically enhance my SOP. This is awesome!

Statement of purpose edited
October 2018


I feel relieved when I know Emma reviews my documents. Thank you, Emma! Thanks for your valuable rewriting and absolutely I will use your services in near future. Best regards, Hasan

Statement of purpose edited
October 2018


This process has been quick, efficient, and superb! My writer did an amazing job and I would recommend this service to anyone!

Statement of purpose edited
October 2018


Agree, the flow is now indeed very smooth with the tweaks. Thank you so much Laura for a job so awesomely done, you are the best!

Statement of purpose edited
October 2018


Emma, You are great. Thank you very much. Please contact me. I'd like to thank you personally, Darkhan.

Dissertation proofread
October 2018


Should add a new category named cover letter Thank you!

Cover letter rewritten
October 2018


excellent work, thank you very much! Franklin

Essay edited
October 2018


Emily, thank you so much. You did a great job

Paper rewritten
October 2018


Great! Many thanks.

Letter edited
October 2018


Hi, Emily! Thank you so much for your efforts! I will try my best to get back to you with the feedbacks tomorrow's morning. Best, Eli

Article rewitten
October 2018


Thank you! And thank you also for your recommendations!

Blog post edited
October 2018


September 2018

Thanks a lot! Your service is really helpful.

Recommendation letter edited
September 2018


It is fantastic and nearly perfect. I am not a native English speaker so I can't express my ambition to the most with my words. The editor understands what I intended to say clearly and speaks it out. Thank you.

Statement of purpose rewritten
September 2018


Sophie did an awesome job proof-reading my personal statement for grad school.

Personal statement edited
September 2018


Thank you so much! really love learning new way to write :)

Recommendation letter rewritten
September 2018


nice but wi ll take on the grammer one nice work tbh , I will use this service for the whole novel ty Thanks for your revision, I'm very satisfied with your work Awesome work... Thanks Sophie!! I see you acknowledged my request.

Novel edited
September 2018


Indeed the professional revision. It looks much better than before. Thank you, Vappingo. Will definitely use the service again. -Junfeng

College application edited
September 2018


I appreciate your work very much.

Essay proofread
September 2018


Thank you very much. The language correction quality is good.

Essay edited
September 2018


I like it, thanks a lot!

Statement of purpose rewritten
September 2018


The dedication Mr. Richard Howard showed was amazing. I really liked my service. The site is easy to use and payment is definitely easy.

Thesis edited
September 2018


You did an excellent job. I am going to use your services again in the future for my other articles. Best regards, Ville Laitinen

Articles edited
September 2018


Special mention to prompt turn-around time. Thanks a lot Vappingo!

Blog post edited
September 2018


Thank you for your hard work!!!

Dissertation edited
September 2018


This process has been quick, efficient, and superb! My writer did an amazing job and I would recommend this service to anyone!

Thesis edited
September 2018


August 2018

I am very satisfied with your work :)

Essay rewritten
August 2018


As always very happy with your services! :-)

Essay edited
August 2018


Thank you very much! I'm impressed by your service! Great job! Thanks) Thank you, Sophie!

Statement of purpose rewritten
August 2018


it was my first time trying your services, I am satisfied and happy with your fast response for both the editor and the customer service . defiantly I am going to try it a gain and recommend it for friends. good luck sare ( the founder ) and for all of your team.

Essay edited
August 2018


Really nice work with the correction. Charles did a great job and even added some comments that were really helpful. We are very pleased with the result :)

Website content edited
August 2018


If every professional in Vappingo is as dedicated, i will gladly recommend your services to my colleagues and community.

Marketing material edited
August 2018


Dears, I appreciate your great effort. I am extremely satisfies with your work. and how the editor convey the meaning in a very professional way.

College application edited
August 2018


I have other chapters that I need the same editor to work. to keep the unification of the style and I think he understand the nature of the topic and its related vocab. I wonder if this is possible?

Thesis edited
August 2018


Thank you, Charles! Good writer, thanks!

Essay edited
August 2018


Hi Charles, Thank you very much for helping me reorganize the structure of my letter. I like the way it develops and its flow. I also removed the sentence you commented as confusing. (I agree!) Do you think that people will be willing to hire me when they read the letter like this?:P Lili

Cover letter edited
August 2018


July 2018

Thank You Hey Emma, thank you so much. Loved your suggestions and included birdhouse and bug hotel! :-) I feel exactly the same way and I hope you have a great time with your daughter this summer! Kind regards, Freya

Blog post edited
July 2018


Thank you so much for your excellent service.

Essay proofread
July 2018


Thank you so much Alyssa for the excellent co-operation with my academic piece of work and I will be back in the due course. Kindest regards, Zlatica

Essay edited
July 2018


Dear Emma, Thanks for the fast delivery. Appreciated the detailed comments and suggestions you have made. Have a good weekend.

Essay edited
July 2018


This helped me tremendously! The overall flow of my paper is so much better, and it is well organized and neat. This was exactly what I needed, and now I am 100% confident in my SOP. Thank you!

Statement of purpose edited
July 2018


Thank you so much. You are amazing.

Statement of purpose edited
July 2018


I really appreciate you taking the time to do this. -Arya

Essay proofread
July 2018


Excellent and thanks for the comments. I revised to: What do you do because you have to? I strive toward excellence and aim high to the fullest. Thanks, Elmer

Personal statement edited
July 2018


Thank you so much for returning It before the due time!!!

Essay edited
July 2018


It is a very good revision! I like it very much and the price is reasonable! I definite will use vappingo again! Thank u so much!

Statement of purpose edited
July 2018


Superb!! the price is reasonable, and quality is beyond the price. I will come back again :) This was my frist time using Vappingo and Im very impressed. Sophie did an awesome job editing my essay and also gave me a few pointers. Will definitely be using this service in the future.

Statement of purpose edited
July 2018


Thank you very much for the polished work. I would be able to submit the work with peace in mind.

Essay edited
July 2018


Nicely done. Thank you so much. Thank you very much for your lovely work! I will be Vappingo's best friend and regular, loyal customer! Love you! Thanks!!

Statement of purpose edited
July 2018


The result I received was way better than I expected. Thank you very much for the detailed, word-to-word proofreading.

Dissertation proofread
July 2018


Hi, thanks for the editing process on my article. My compliment to Charles, the editor appointed to review, i really appreciated all your feedback.

Article edited
July 2018


the rewriting was very good and I am going to recommend you to my friends thanks a lot

Article rewritten
July 2018


June 2018

Dear Writter,

Thank you very much for making the changes. I had a quick look at this since i have a flight in an in few hours so heading to airport. Once i arrive in my destination on Sunday i will read though it all and let you know if i need any changes. 
However, i think its pretty much done and i really like the flow and structure of the paper. If in case i need any changes that would be very minor one.

Once again thank you very much for your time and patience in this process. 

Best regards,
zahra

Statement of purpose edited
June 2018


I would like to thank Emma for her efforts. Few points in the final reports need to be rectified.

Journal article rewritten
June 2018


hello,

Thank you for the rewritten material !

Website content rewritten
June 2018



Many thanks for sending me a perfect job as always.

Essay rewritten
June 2018


Hi Charles, 
Thank you very much for helping me reorganize the structure of my letter. I like the way it develops and its flow. I also removed the sentence you commented as confusing. (I agree!) Do you think that people will be willing to hire me when they read the letter like this?:P

Lili

Cover letter edited
June 2018


Thanks for the great editing.

Website content edited
June 2018


Thank you for a quick delivery.

Brochure proofread
June 2018



I cannot thank you enough! I absolutely appreciate your time and love the changes that were made.

Statement of purpose edited
June 2018


Thank you very much. I appreciate your words of encouragement. You have done a great job with my SOP. I am super impressed.

Statement of purpose edited
June 2018


I truly appreciate the prompt response!!!

Scholarship application edited
June 2018


Thank you!

You did an excellent job. I am going to use your services again in the future for my other articles.

Best regards,
Ville

Essay edited
June 2018


Thank you for your revisions, all changes were clear and well founded.

Privacy notice proofread
June 2018


Thank you, Emma, for your great help as usual! kind regards

Blog articles edited
June 2018


Very satisfied. Thanks for the suggestions and ideas.

Essay proofread
June 2018


Thank you Alyssa for all your help. You've done an amazing job.Thank you for relieving me of the stress Ive been going through for weeks.
I am definitely feeling more confident about my application process now. God bless you.

Statement of purpose edited
June 2018


Excellent work once again! Thank you so much. Will place more orders in the future :)

Academic document rewritten
June 2018


Definitely VERY satisfied !!!! 

Excellent work :)

Essay rewritten
June 2018


February 2018

Very satisfied. Thank you very much Sophie.

LinkedIn article
February 2018


Thank you so much for your excellent service.

Academic document edited
February 2018


Thank you very much Richard for the editing and input.

Essay edited
February 2018


Thank you so much. I am reading my text after correction. It is so much better than it was before. Thank you again:)

Essay edited
February 2018


Thank-you so much for your help with this! You made my sentences flow better and helped me with my grammar and tenses as well.

Statement of purpose edited
February 2018


Thank you again for your patient and hard work.

Statement of purpose edited
February 2018


I really loved how you edited my paper! I suck a grammar and punctuation, but you helped make everything flow and sound better. Thanks!

Personal statement rewritten
February 2018


It was a very nice experience. The editor(s) provide a good revision. Emma was extremely kind and helpful. I like that she encouraged to ask more questions if I have. I might submit the full paper once it is ready.

Essay revised
February 2018


Thanks very well! I'm happy to work with you again!

Website content rewritten
February 2018


Hi Richard, Thank you very much for your professionalism. Best Regards, Davor

Essay proofread
February 2018


Thank you, Richard, for your great help!

Blog article edited
February 2018


Thank you so much for your amazing work!!!

Letter edited
February 2018


The content you have written for me is excellent. I really love it! Thank you :) :)

Statement of purpose rewritten
February 2018


Thank you very much for the edit. After reading it, it sounds much better than I initially wrote it. I am very satisfied with the end product.

Essay edited
February 2018


Charles really improved my essay a lot. Many thanks!

Application essay edited
February 2018


Thank you updating my essay. It has been improved beyond recognition! I'm very satisfied with your great service.

Statement of purpose proofread
February 2018


Thanks so much for the document. You made incredible suggestions and improvements. I really appreciated.

Statement of purpose edited
February 2018


Thank you very much for the polished work. I would be able to submit the work with peace in mind.

Essay proofread
February 2018



Thank you! for your support. I love it! I feel like you know me for years. I will probably post it tomorrow, I hope it will inspire and help someone, somewhere in this world. There is more articles coming soon! Merci! Emma.

Bog post rewritten
February 2018


Now it is perfect. It is a great job. Thanks a lot, Emma. Best Regards, Bulut

Application letter rewritten
February 2018


Great work, thank you very much Emma

Website content rewritten
February 2018


Thank you for the edit and the tips

Essay edited
February 2018


Thanks so much for taking a look at my essay and revising the points. You've done a great job making the essay straight to the point and bringing it down to the word limit.

Admission essay edited
February 2018


WOULD BE GREAT TO HAVE EMMA AGAIN.   SHE DID A MAGNIFICENT JOB.

Website content edited
February 2018


Just what I wanted. And, it was quick and cheap. Thank You!

Sales letter rewritten
February 2018


We are very satisfied with the work and we will use your services again without a doubt.

App descriptions rewritten
February 2018


Thank you for your conscious effort on this letter, I really appreciate it.

Motivation letter edited
February 2018


YES! Verry satisfied!! I will upload more texts!!!!

Website content rewritten
February 2018


Thank you very much, Emma, for your great help!

Blog post edited
February 2018


Thank you for having done such a great Job. I feel glad to use your editing service and have Emma as my editor, who's editing is excellent.

Statement of purpose edited
February 2018


So great! Thanks for the modification.

College application edited
February 2018


Great job Sophie. Thank you.

Blog article edited
February 2018


January 2018

Thanks for your effort Emma!

Resume edited
January 2018


Good job, guys.

Web content rewritten
January 2018


This is my first time using vappingo and I am very*10 satisfied with the result! Thank you for your efforts Sophie :) Regards, Daeun

Statement of purpose edited
January 2018


Thank you so much for your hard work. I am wondering how could you revise my next order (if there is). I really like that you always put comments for improvement. It seems like there are so many editors who check my work, but you could revise mine. Please let me know. Thank you. -Regards, Angela

Letter edited
January 2018


I like this writer, and want to ask him for help again.

Academic paper rewritten
January 2018


Hi, thanks for the editing process on my article. My compliment to Charles, the editor appointed to review, I really appreciated all your feedback.

If every professional in Vappingo is as dedicated, I will gladly recommend your services to my colleagues and community.

Have a wonderful day and hope to see our services, again, in a near future!

Essay edited
January 2018


Thank you very much:D!

Statement of purpose edited
January 2018


This last version is very dignified and true. Wow! well done. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Blog post rewritten
January 2018


Thank you very much. I am really satisfied with your work.

Essay edited
January 2018


Outstanding quality result - met agreed outcome and timeframe. Would highly recommend and will use in future

Statement of intent edited
January 2018


Very satisfied. Thank you so much.

Resume rewritten
January 2018


Thank you very much for your work on my resume. I finished updating it with the last fixes you mentioned. Best Regards, Quentin

Resume rewritten
January 2018


Very satisfied, specially speed of delivery! Thanks. Rachel.

Essay edited
January 2018


Thank you for your suggestion. Client is a better word and I will update it in the text.

Web content edited
January 2018


Great work, very helpful. Thank you.

Statement of purpose edited
January 2018


I went through the essay and I am so happy with all the suggestions and changes! Thank you for all the help provided on this.

Statement of purpose edited
January 2018


Thank you Richard, I am pleased and will take your advice to have it seem more professional.

Statement of purpose edited
January 2018


Very satisfied. Thank you so much.

Resume rewritten
January 2018


Hi, Thank you so much for the editting. I am very satisfied with the work. Since I am not a native English writter, the editting from Vappingo much improved my essay. Good timing, reasonable price, high quality. Will reuse the serivce later. Definitly, will recommend to other people!

Statement of purpose rewritten
January 2018


Impressive quality! Thanks.

Recommendation letter edited
January 2018


Hi Emma, thank you for your great help and your positive feedback! Till next time!

Blog post edited
January 2018


The changes made were helpful and effective. Vocabulary and sentence structure were immaculate.

Application essay edited
January 2018


The writer is great, I wish her the best!

Personal statement edited
January 2018


I would love to use your services in the future. I am extremely pleased with my order.

Letter of recommendation edited
January 2018


This is my second time to have Emma as an editor. Emma did a very great an impressive job. She scour my language very well without distorting the meaning of my statement of propose. I will definitely use Vappingo again if I need editng service.

Statement of purpose edited
January 2018


Many, many thanks.

Website content rewritten
January 2018


Thank you very much

Statement of purpose edited
January 2018


January-December 2017

Hello Sophie, Thanks a lot for SOP it looks really good now and I had to cut down my Statement it to 500 words according to the university requirement. Thank you, Viswa.

Statement of purpose edited
December 2017


Dear Sophie, Thanks very well for your swift response. Your edits are great. Thanks, Ayumi.

Statement of purpose edited
December 2017


Thank you for your great work! MUCH MUCH MUCH APPRECIATED!

Application essay edited
December 2017


It was really perfect, thanks a lot.

Essay edited
December 2017


Thank you so much Richard. I appreciate your work - it will be a much nicer release now. -Christine

Press release edited
December 2017


Thank you Richard for your edit. I appreciate the feedback about my being bilingual (which I am) and will take all your remaining suggestions into account.

Statement of purpose edited
December 2017


Thank you very much Catarina for your revisions. I read through the improved version of my writing and absolutely love it!! The word choices and organization of the paragraphs are absolutely amazing. I am very satisfied with the final product and I will fill in the rest of the blanks. I am seriously impressed by the service and would love to use it again in the future. My best wishes goes to you.

Statement of purpose edited
December 2017


I'm really happy with the edit- you've done a great job of tying it all in very precisely.

Letter of recommendation edited
December 2017


I’m very grateful for all the hard work Emma puts into my work! It makes my life much easier and free of stress. Please pass my thanks and gratitidue to Emma!

Academic editing
December 2017


Thank you very much for your service, I am happy with your service and thank you for your valuable suggestions, Suri

Personal statement edited
December 2017


Excellent!!!

Essay edited
December 2017



Thank you so much! I really appreciate your amazing work!

Academic document proofread
November 2017


Worth the money! Great work!

Application essay edited
November 2017


Tara's editing is definitely one of the best I've ever encountered! Not only the words are fluid, formal, and professional but also with every edit there is a corresponding comment explains the thought. I am deeply appreciated!

Letter of recommendation edited
November 2017


I am very happy with your services! If I had known about this a couple of years ago I would have used it a lot more!

Book chapter rewritten
November 2017


Thank you so much for your help!!

Essay edited
November 2017


Fantastic!!

Statement of purpose edited
November 2017


Thanks for your time and effort editing my statement of purpose.

Statement of purpose edited
November 2017


Thanks for your service, it has been very helpful. I am going to use your services again.

Letter of recommendation edited
November 2017


Hi Emma, "Wow" - that's what came out of my mouth when I first saw the edit and I'm not exaggerating! It looks really really better now. The language is so fluid and coherent. Thank you so much for editing my SOP and special thanks for all your helpful comments! I have a few comments and questions which I will include in the "request revision" section. Thanks, Anmol

Statement of purpose edited
November 2017


Thank you so much for your revision. I am very happy with the changes. Best regards, Jim

Academic paper edited
November 2017


I want to express my extreme gratitude and awe at the expertise and customer service. The service I received was so prompt and of high standards. Very much satisfied with Vappingo. Thank you very much.

Admissions essay edited
November 2017


Very satisfied. Great Work, Thanks Emma:)

Essay edited
November 2017


Thank you so much for your writing. I am really happy of choosing your institute.

Statement of purpose edited
November 2017


Thank you! It looks much better now!!

Personal statement edited
November 2017


Perfect! I have carefully read modification and fixes, and all looks very good! Thank you.

Teaching statement edited
November 2017


Thank you! This looks really good

Dissertation chapter edited
November 2017


Excellently written. Thank you very much!

Admissions essay edited
November 2017


Thanks for your help. I am happy with the changes made in the document.

Statement of purpose edited
November 2017


EW and Vappingo. You rock!

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November 2017


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