{"id":1511,"date":"2011-04-29T10:15:28","date_gmt":"2011-04-29T10:15:28","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/?p=1511"},"modified":"2026-03-18T17:31:05","modified_gmt":"2026-03-18T17:31:05","slug":"the-10-commandments-of-writing-a-great-essay","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/the-10-commandments-of-writing-a-great-essay\/","title":{"rendered":"Writing a Great Essay: The Ten Commandments"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/preacher.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-medium wp-image-2252\" style=\"border: medium solid #8f8f8f;\" title=\"preacher\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/preacher-198x300.jpg\" alt=\"Picture of a preacher\" width=\"158\" height=\"240\" \/><\/a>Welcome to the ten commandments of writing a great essay.<\/p>\n<p>You\u2019d better take a pew and listen very carefully.<\/p>\n<p>I say onto you that I have visited the promised land of Exceptional Grades. As I was tempted to coast through the Valley of Scrape-By, a voice spake with me and bade me to listen, for he had knowledge to share.<\/p>\n<p>The celestial power handed down these ten rules for writing a great essay, and I present them to you, my brothers and sisters. Follow them all, or you shall perish in the hell of infernal bad grades (failing that, you can hire an <a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/Editing-Services\/Essay-Editors\">essay editor<\/a>!)<\/p>\n<p>(No offense intended to the author of the original Ten Commandments.)<!--more--><\/p>\n<h2>The Ten Commandments of Writing a Great Essay<\/h2>\n<h3><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-One-01.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-2106\" title=\"Vappingo One Correct\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-One-01.jpg\" alt=\"Picture of the number one\" width=\"57\" height=\"57\" \/><\/a><\/strong>Thou shalt research, and thou shalt recognize that Facebook is not research<\/h3>\n<p><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/research.png\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-1512\" title=\"research\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/research-300x192.png\" alt=\"Great essay writing involves research\" width=\"300\" height=\"192\" \/><\/a><br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Yep, you really do need to read the books, search the journals and scour the web to find as much information about the topic as you can. Even though this element of the essay writing process is somewhat dull, it will actually make writing the damn thing much easier in the long term. Trust me on this.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h3><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-Two-01.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-2105\" title=\"Vappingo Two Correct\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-Two-01.jpg\" alt=\"Picture of the number two\" width=\"57\" height=\"57\" \/><\/a><\/strong>Thou shalt structure thy essay before thou writes it<\/h3>\n<p><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/planning03.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-1520\" title=\"planning\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/planning03-300x209.jpg\" alt=\"Planning an essay\" width=\"300\" height=\"209\" \/><\/a><br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Ever heard the phrase \u201cIt\u2019s all in the planning?\u201d Well, it really is. Your essay should have a very clear structure that consists of an introductory paragraph, three to five paragraphs that develop the ideas and arguments, and a conclusion. Create a high-level plan of which ideas and points you intend to develop in which section, and this will make the writing process much more effective.<\/p>\n<p>Have you\u00a0 written an essay that needs editing? Our guide to <a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/editing-an-essay\/\">essay editing<\/a> may be exactly what you need.<\/p>\n<h3><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-Three-01.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-2104\" title=\"Vappingo Three Correct\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-Three-01.jpg\" alt=\"Picture of the number three\" width=\"57\" height=\"57\" \/><\/a><\/strong>Thou shalt write a thesis statement and shalt buildeth thy entire paper around thy thesis statement<\/h3>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/cat-I-deleted-your-thesis.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-1522\" title=\"cat-I-deleted-your-thesis\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/cat-I-deleted-your-thesis-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"Writing a thesis statement\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Once you have a good idea about what you are actually going to say in your essay, you should know what type of answer you intend to give. If you don\u2019t, you need to do more research&#8230; did you read what I wrote about Facebook?<\/p>\n<p>Before actually writing the essay, you should form a thesis statement. This statement will tell the reader what you will be writing about and what your essay will seek to prove. Include your thesis statement in your introductory paragraph so that you set the scene for the information that will follow. If you want a shortcut to how to write a thesis statements, check out <a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/how-to-write-a-thesis-statement\/\">our thesis statement formula<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h3><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-Four-01.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-2103\" title=\"Vappingo Four Correct\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-Four-01.jpg\" alt=\"Picture of the number four\" width=\"57\" height=\"57\" \/><\/a><\/strong>Thou shalt answereth the question set, and it will be good<\/h3>\n<p><strong><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/answer-the-question.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter\" title=\"answer the question\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/answer-the-question-300x267.png\" alt=\"Make sure your essay answers the question\" width=\"300\" height=\"267\" \/><\/a><\/strong><br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>It is very common for students to reel off tons of facts and figures without actually answering the question that has been set. What a total waste of time! Make sure you read the question several times and are 100% certain that you know what is being asked. Repeatedly ask yourself if you are answering the question as you write your essay. One great method to ensure that you are, is to refer back to the question at the end of every paragraph by including a statement that confirms how the information you have provided answers the prompt or supports your thesis statement.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<h3><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-Five-01.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-2102\" title=\"Vappingo Five Correct\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-Five-01.jpg\" alt=\"Picture of the number five\" width=\"57\" height=\"57\" \/><\/a><\/strong>Thou shalt avoid waffle and shalt not use jargon when common language will serve<\/h3>\n<p><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/Avoid-jargon.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-1513\" title=\"Avoid jargon\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/Avoid-jargon.jpg\" alt=\"Avoid jargon in essays\" width=\"175\" height=\"175\" \/><\/a><br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Every single sentence that you write in your essay should serve a purpose. They should be clear, straight to the point and informative. Don\u2019t be tempted to use up your word count by repeating the same idea several times using different words: you will fool no one. Waffle will bore your reader and damage the overall coherency of your paper.<\/p>\n<h3><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-Six-01.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-2101\" title=\"Vappingo Six-01\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-Six-01.jpg\" alt=\"Picture of the number six\" width=\"57\" height=\"57\" \/><\/a>Thou shalt present one idea per paragraph, and never shalt thou write a paragraph that serveth no purpose<\/h3>\n<p><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/One-idea-per-pagarapg.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-1523\" title=\"One idea per paragraph\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/One-idea-per-pagarapg-300x226.jpg\" alt=\"structuring your essay\" width=\"300\" height=\"226\" \/><\/a><\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Present and write about just one idea per paragraph. This will help you to create a structured argument and will make your paper easy to follow. Refer back to your thesis statement or question at the end of every paragraph (yep, it\u2019s that important I have written it twice), by doing this, you ensure that you are actually answering the question in a methodical manner.<\/p>\n<h3><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-Seven-01.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-2100\" title=\"Vappingo Seven-01\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/Vappingo-Seven-01.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"57\" height=\"57\" \/><\/a>Thou mayest covet other authors&#8217; works, but thou shalt not steal them<\/h3>\n<p><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/Plagiarism.png\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-1514\" title=\"Plagiarism\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/Plagiarism-300x273.png\" alt=\"I like the writing in the paper, I only wish more of it had been yours\" width=\"300\" height=\"273\" \/><\/a><\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Never, ever copy an essay off the Internet or from a friend. Despite the fact that there is absolutely no point in doing this because you will learn absolutely nothing, the majority of educational establishments now use plagiarism software. Even if you don\u2019t get caught out now, there\u2019s a chance you will in the future and, in the worst-case scenario, your qualification may even be cancelled. Can you imagine breaking that news to your parents?<\/p>\n<p>Always ensure that you fully reference the work of any publications you have utilized within your essay and include full and accurate citations where required.<\/p>\n<p>Looking for more help to write an essay? Take a look at our <a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/essay-editing-checklist\/\">essay writing checklist<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/Vappingo-eight.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-2110\" title=\"Vappingo eight correct\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/Vappingo-eight.jpg\" alt=\"Picture of the number eight\" width=\"43\" height=\"170\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<h3>Thou shalt write thy essay thyself and shalt not pay thy neighbor<\/h3>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/reportcard-plagiarism-cartoon.gif\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-1515\" title=\"reportcard-plagiarism-cartoon\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/reportcard-plagiarism-cartoon-300x187.gif\" alt=\"Don't buy essays\" width=\"300\" height=\"187\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>There are websites out there that offer to write your essay for you for a very substantial fee\u2014avoid them like the plague. Regardless of the fact that using these sites is actually cheating, you will not learn anything from your essays and will not have the knowledge that you need to get on in life.<\/p>\n<p>If you have no morals and don\u2019t care about learning, there\u2019s another problem with paying for essays; unless you can avoid using these sites for every essay you submit, there\u2019s a chance that your professor will notice discrepancies in the quality of your writing, and you may be forced to answer some very serious questions. Good luck with that.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/05\/Vappingo-nine.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-2153\" title=\"Vappingo nine\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/05\/Vappingo-nine.jpg\" alt=\"picture of the number nine\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<h3>Thou shalt avoid the use of passive voice<\/h3>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/austinnew3spok.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-1516\" title=\"Passive voice\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/austinnew3spok.jpg\" alt=\"Avoid passive voice in essays\" width=\"220\" height=\"218\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Overuse of the passive voice can lead to writing which is unclear and flat. If you repeatedly use passive voice throughout your essay, you will bore your audience to tears, and the reader will lose all concept of the agent (no, I am not referring to 007).<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/05\/Vappingo-ten.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-2155\" title=\"Vappingo ten\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/05\/Vappingo-ten.jpg\" alt=\"Picture of the number ten\" width=\"66\" height=\"153\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<h3>Thou shalt not forsake thy proofreading, and thou shalt honor English rules<\/h3>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/Proofread-your-essay.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-1517\" title=\"Proofread your essay\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/Proofread-your-essay-300x200.jpg\" alt=\"Proofreading is easier said than done\" width=\"300\" height=\"200\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Do you think Stephen King or J. K. Rowling publish their work without ensuring that it is painstakingly proofread? Of course they don\u2019t, and neither should you. There\u2019s no point in putting hours of work into an essay if you are going to damage your credibility by handing in something that is full of mistakes. Your professor won\u2019t take you seriously, and your grade will suffer.<\/p>\n<p>If you need help perfecting your essays, check out our academic editing services.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Welcome to the ten commandments of writing a great essay. You\u2019d better take a pew and listen very carefully. I say onto you that I have visited the promised land of Exceptional Grades. As I was tempted to coast through the Valley of Scrape-By, a voice spake with me and bade me to listen, for &#8230; <a title=\"Writing a Great Essay: The Ten Commandments\" class=\"read-more\" href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/the-10-commandments-of-writing-a-great-essay\/\" aria-label=\"More on Writing a Great Essay: The Ten Commandments\">Read more<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":2252,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[30],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1511","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-fun-and-fails"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1511","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1511"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1511\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":9515,"href":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1511\/revisions\/9515"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-json\/"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1511"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1511"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1511"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}