{"id":10362,"date":"2025-04-04T12:17:24","date_gmt":"2025-04-04T12:17:24","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/?p=10362"},"modified":"2025-04-05T12:08:40","modified_gmt":"2025-04-05T12:08:40","slug":"top-10-grammar-issues-for-esl-thesis-writers","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/top-10-grammar-issues-for-esl-thesis-writers\/","title":{"rendered":"Top 10 Grammar Issues for ESL Thesis Writers"},"content":{"rendered":"<p class=\"\" data-start=\"173\" data-end=\"701\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/writing-a-thesis\/\">Writing a thesis<\/a> in English as a second language is a remarkable achievement\u2014but it can also feel overwhelming. You\u2019ve done the hard work: researching your topic, analysing your data, and developing your ideas. But when it comes to writing it all down, even strong research can be undermined by simple grammar mistakes. For ESL (English as a Second Language) students, these errors are not a reflection of ability\u2014they&#8217;re a natural part of working in another language. That said, in academic writing, grammar really does matter.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"703\" data-end=\"1119\">A well-written thesis is not just about what you say\u2014it\u2019s about how clearly and professionally you say it. Grammar errors can confuse your reader, weaken your argument, or distract from the originality of your research. Even small mistakes\u2014like using the wrong preposition or article\u2014can affect how your work is perceived, especially by examiners who are evaluating clarity and fluency as part of academic standards.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1121\" data-end=\"1538\">The good news? These errors are fixable\u2014and you\u2019re not alone. Most ESL writers struggle with the same types of grammar issues, and with the right guidance, they\u2019re easy to spot and correct. In this article, we\u2019ll walk you through the ten most common grammar mistakes ESL students make when writing a thesis. We\u2019ll explain what they are, show you how to fix them, and share tips to help you write with more confidence.<\/p>\n<blockquote data-start=\"1540\" data-end=\"1880\">\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1542\" data-end=\"1880\">Want even more support? Check out our <a class=\"\" href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/Proofreading-Services\/Thesis-Proofreading-Services\" target=\"_new\" rel=\"noopener\" data-start=\"1580\" data-end=\"1687\">Thesis Proofreading Services<\/a> designed specifically for non-native English speakers.<br data-start=\"1742\" data-end=\"1745\" \/>See also: <a class=\"cursor-pointer\" href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/writing-an-academic-thesis-in-a-second-language\/\" target=\"_new\" rel=\"noopener\" data-start=\"1757\" data-end=\"1880\">Writing an Academic Thesis in a Second Language<\/a><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p data-start=\"1542\" data-end=\"1880\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-10389 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/04\/Top-10-ESL-errors.png\" alt=\"Student proofreading thesis on laptop for grammar errors\" width=\"800\" height=\"451\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/04\/Top-10-ESL-errors.png 800w, https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/04\/Top-10-ESL-errors-300x169.png 300w, https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/04\/Top-10-ESL-errors-768x433.png 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 800px) 100vw, 800px\" \/><\/p>\n<h2 data-start=\"1542\" data-end=\"1880\"><strong>Top Ten ESL Grammar Errors<\/strong><\/h2>\n<h2 class=\"\" data-start=\"90\" data-end=\"118\">1. Subject-Verb Agreement<\/h2>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"120\" data-end=\"494\">One of the most common grammar problems ESL thesis writers face is subject-verb agreement. In English, the subject and verb must agree in number\u2014singular subjects take singular verbs, and plural subjects take plural verbs. This might sound simple, but it becomes more complex in long or technical sentences, especially when modifiers or unfamiliar noun forms get in the way.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"496\" data-end=\"508\">For example:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"510\" data-end=\"622\">\u274c <em data-start=\"512\" data-end=\"564\">The results of the experiment <strong data-start=\"543\" data-end=\"550\">was<\/strong> significant.<\/em><br data-start=\"564\" data-end=\"567\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"569\" data-end=\"622\">The results of the experiment <strong data-start=\"600\" data-end=\"608\">were<\/strong> significant.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"624\" data-end=\"777\">In the incorrect sentence, \u201cwas\u201d appears to match the word \u201cexperiment,\u201d but the true subject is \u201cresults,\u201d which is plural\u2014so the verb should be \u201cwere.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"779\" data-end=\"882\">Another tricky area involves collective nouns or phrases with embedded clauses. Consider the following:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"884\" data-end=\"1002\">\u274c <em data-start=\"886\" data-end=\"942\">The committee <strong data-start=\"901\" data-end=\"909\">have<\/strong> decided to postpone the review.<\/em><br data-start=\"942\" data-end=\"945\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"947\" data-end=\"1002\">The committee <strong data-start=\"962\" data-end=\"969\">has<\/strong> decided to postpone the review.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1004\" data-end=\"1292\">Even though \u201ccommittee\u201d refers to a group of people, it is treated as a singular noun in American English, so the verb must be singular (\u201chas\u201d). In British English, treating collective nouns as plural is more common\u2014so consistency matters depending on the academic style you&#8217;re following.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1294\" data-end=\"1595\">Subject-verb disagreement often goes unnoticed in early drafts because the sentence might &#8220;feel&#8221; correct when you read it quickly. That\u2019s why it&#8217;s essential to double-check every long or complex sentence, especially those that include relative clauses, parenthetical statements, or unusual word order.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1597\" data-end=\"1855\">To make proofreading easier, try this tip: identify the <strong data-start=\"1653\" data-end=\"1669\">main subject<\/strong> and then match it directly with the verb\u2014ignoring everything else in the sentence for a moment. This simple technique can help you spot agreement errors before they weaken your writing.<\/p>\n<h2 class=\"\" data-start=\"83\" data-end=\"115\">2. Article Usage (a, an, the)<\/h2>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"117\" data-end=\"448\">Articles are a constant source of confusion for ESL writers\u2014especially for those whose native language doesn\u2019t use them. In English, we use <strong data-start=\"257\" data-end=\"262\">a<\/strong>, <strong data-start=\"264\" data-end=\"270\">an<\/strong>, and <strong data-start=\"276\" data-end=\"283\">the<\/strong> to signal whether a noun is general, specific, countable, or uncountable. Knowing which article to use (or whether to use one at all) can be surprisingly difficult.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"450\" data-end=\"489\">Let\u2019s break it down with some examples:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"491\" data-end=\"605\">\u274c <em data-start=\"493\" data-end=\"550\">She conducted <strong data-start=\"508\" data-end=\"514\">an<\/strong> extensive research into the topic.<\/em><br data-start=\"550\" data-end=\"553\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"555\" data-end=\"605\">She conducted extensive research into the topic.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"607\" data-end=\"803\">In this example, \u201cresearch\u201d is an <strong data-start=\"641\" data-end=\"661\">uncountable noun<\/strong>, so it doesn\u2019t require an article. Many ESL writers mistakenly treat it as countable because it seems measurable\u2014but grammatically, it\u2019s not.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"805\" data-end=\"835\">Here\u2019s another common mistake:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"837\" data-end=\"986\">\u274c <em data-start=\"839\" data-end=\"909\">The participants completed <strong data-start=\"867\" data-end=\"872\">a<\/strong> survey about the course experience.<\/em><br data-start=\"909\" data-end=\"912\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"914\" data-end=\"986\">The participants completed <strong data-start=\"942\" data-end=\"949\">the<\/strong> survey about the course experience.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"988\" data-end=\"1137\">\u201cA survey\u201d suggests any random survey, but in a thesis, it\u2019s usually a specific instrument you designed. Therefore, \u201cthe survey\u201d is more appropriate.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1139\" data-end=\"1165\">General rules to remember:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li data-start=\"1168\" data-end=\"1262\">Use <strong data-start=\"1172\" data-end=\"1180\">a\/an<\/strong> for something general or mentioned for the first time: <em data-start=\"1236\" data-end=\"1260\">\u201ca theory,\u201d \u201can idea.\u201d<\/em><\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1265\" data-end=\"1361\">Use <strong data-start=\"1269\" data-end=\"1276\">the<\/strong> for something specific or already mentioned: <em data-start=\"1322\" data-end=\"1359\">\u201cthe theory outlined in Chapter 2.\u201d<\/em><\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1364\" data-end=\"1495\">Do <strong data-start=\"1367\" data-end=\"1374\">not<\/strong> use articles with most uncountable nouns when speaking generally: <em data-start=\"1441\" data-end=\"1495\">\u201cevidence,\u201d \u201cliterature,\u201d \u201cinformation,\u201d \u201cresearch.\u201d<\/em><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1497\" data-end=\"1513\">Another example:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1515\" data-end=\"1628\">\u274c <em data-start=\"1517\" data-end=\"1574\">This study will provide <strong data-start=\"1542\" data-end=\"1549\">the<\/strong> evidence for the claim.<\/em><br data-start=\"1574\" data-end=\"1577\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"1579\" data-end=\"1628\">This study will provide evidence for the claim.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1630\" data-end=\"1803\">If you\u2019re referring to evidence in general, you don\u2019t need \u201cthe.\u201d But if you\u2019ve previously specified which evidence you&#8217;re talking about, then \u201cthe evidence\u201d is appropriate.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1805\" data-end=\"2182\">Articles are subtle but powerful. Misusing them won\u2019t always cause confusion, but frequent errors can make your writing seem unpolished or non-native. Take the time to review article rules, and when in doubt, consult trusted academic sources or dictionaries like the <a class=\"cursor-pointer\" target=\"_new\" rel=\"noopener\" data-start=\"2072\" data-end=\"2129\">Cambridge Dictionary<\/a> to check whether a noun is countable or uncountable.<\/p>\n<h2 class=\"\" data-start=\"74\" data-end=\"97\">3. Tense Consistency<\/h2>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"99\" data-end=\"433\">Switching between tenses is one of the easiest grammar mistakes to make\u2014especially when writing over several weeks or months. Many ESL thesis writers start a paragraph in the past tense and unintentionally shift to present or future tense midway through. These tense shifts can confuse the reader and weaken the flow of your argument.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"435\" data-end=\"460\">Let\u2019s look at an example:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"462\" data-end=\"743\">\u274c <em data-start=\"464\" data-end=\"553\">This chapter <strong data-start=\"478\" data-end=\"491\">discussed<\/strong> the findings and <strong data-start=\"509\" data-end=\"518\">shows<\/strong> that the results are significant.<\/em><br data-start=\"553\" data-end=\"556\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"558\" data-end=\"647\">This chapter <strong data-start=\"572\" data-end=\"585\">discusses<\/strong> the findings and <strong data-start=\"603\" data-end=\"612\">shows<\/strong> that the results are significant.<\/em><br data-start=\"647\" data-end=\"650\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"652\" data-end=\"743\">This chapter <strong data-start=\"666\" data-end=\"679\">discussed<\/strong> the findings and <strong data-start=\"697\" data-end=\"707\">showed<\/strong> that the results were significant.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"745\" data-end=\"1034\">Both corrected versions are technically fine\u2014the key is that <strong data-start=\"806\" data-end=\"826\">the tenses match<\/strong>. In the first, present tense is used for a general academic tone; in the second, past tense is used to describe work that was already completed. Whichever you choose, the important thing is to be consistent.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1036\" data-end=\"1080\">In academic writing, here\u2019s a general guide:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li data-start=\"1083\" data-end=\"1159\">Use <strong data-start=\"1087\" data-end=\"1101\">past tense<\/strong> to describe methods and results: <em data-start=\"1135\" data-end=\"1159\">\u201cData were collected\u2026\u201d<\/em><\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1162\" data-end=\"1249\">Use <strong data-start=\"1166\" data-end=\"1183\">present tense<\/strong> for general truths and interpretations: <em data-start=\"1224\" data-end=\"1249\">\u201cThe findings suggest\u2026\u201d<\/em><\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1252\" data-end=\"1341\">Use <strong data-start=\"1256\" data-end=\"1275\">present perfect<\/strong> to link past events to the present: <em data-start=\"1312\" data-end=\"1341\">\u201cResearchers have debated\u2026\u201d<\/em><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1343\" data-end=\"1388\">Here&#8217;s another example of inconsistent tense:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1390\" data-end=\"1554\">\u274c <em data-start=\"1392\" data-end=\"1470\">Participants were selected randomly and the data <strong data-start=\"1442\" data-end=\"1448\">is<\/strong> analysed using SPSS.<\/em><br data-start=\"1470\" data-end=\"1473\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"1475\" data-end=\"1554\">Participants were selected randomly and the data <strong data-start=\"1525\" data-end=\"1532\">was<\/strong> analysed using SPSS.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1556\" data-end=\"1837\">When writing your thesis, pick a primary tense for each section (usually past tense for methods\/results, present tense for interpretation\/discussion) and stick with it. Rereading your work aloud can help you spot sudden changes in tense that you may have overlooked during writing.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1839\" data-end=\"1985\">Tense consistency may seem small, but it has a big impact. It helps readers follow your logic without getting distracted by sudden shifts in time.<\/p>\n<blockquote data-start=\"1987\" data-end=\"2117\">\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1989\" data-end=\"2117\">Tip: Create a \u201ctense map\u201d for your thesis. Note which tense you\u2019ll use in each chapter or section, and refer to it when editing.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p data-start=\"1989\" data-end=\"2117\">See more: <a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/what-tense-should-i-write-my-thesis-in\/\">What Tense Should I Write my Thesis in?<\/a><\/p>\n<h2 class=\"\" data-start=\"84\" data-end=\"110\">4. Preposition Problems<\/h2>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"112\" data-end=\"470\">Prepositions may be short, but they can cause big problems\u2014especially for ESL writers. These tiny words (like <em data-start=\"222\" data-end=\"254\">in, on, at, of, about, to, for<\/em>) carry a lot of grammatical weight and don\u2019t always follow logical rules. Often, the correct preposition depends not on meaning alone but on usage and convention, which can be frustrating for those learning English.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"472\" data-end=\"519\">Let\u2019s look at some examples of common mistakes:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"521\" data-end=\"615\">\u274c <em data-start=\"523\" data-end=\"568\">The paper focuses <strong data-start=\"542\" data-end=\"551\">about<\/strong> climate policy.<\/em><br data-start=\"568\" data-end=\"571\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"573\" data-end=\"615\">The paper focuses <strong data-start=\"592\" data-end=\"598\">on<\/strong> climate policy.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"617\" data-end=\"718\">\u274c <em data-start=\"619\" data-end=\"666\">The participants responded <strong data-start=\"647\" data-end=\"653\">on<\/strong> the survey.<\/em><br data-start=\"666\" data-end=\"669\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"671\" data-end=\"718\">The participants responded <strong data-start=\"699\" data-end=\"705\">to<\/strong> the survey.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"720\" data-end=\"916\">These may seem like small errors, but incorrect prepositions can make your writing sound awkward or unclear to native readers. In academic writing\u2014especially at the thesis level\u2014precision matters.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"918\" data-end=\"941\">Here\u2019s another example:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"943\" data-end=\"1064\">\u274c <em data-start=\"945\" data-end=\"1002\">This study examines the effect <strong data-start=\"977\" data-end=\"983\">in<\/strong> social media use.<\/em><br data-start=\"1002\" data-end=\"1005\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"1007\" data-end=\"1064\">This study examines the effect <strong data-start=\"1039\" data-end=\"1045\">of<\/strong> social media use.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1066\" data-end=\"1398\">Many prepositions are <strong data-start=\"1088\" data-end=\"1105\">collocational<\/strong>, meaning they\u2019re linked to specific words. You don\u2019t just <em data-start=\"1164\" data-end=\"1181\">apply something<\/em>, you <em data-start=\"1187\" data-end=\"1206\">apply for a grant<\/em>, <em data-start=\"1208\" data-end=\"1228\">apply to a program<\/em>, or <em data-start=\"1233\" data-end=\"1261\">apply knowledge in a field<\/em>. Each verb or noun may require its own preposition, and sometimes there\u2019s no clear \u201crule\u201d\u2014you simply have to learn the correct pairings.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1400\" data-end=\"1448\">To help build your confidence with prepositions:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li data-start=\"1451\" data-end=\"1526\">Read published journal articles in your field to see how phrases are used<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1529\" data-end=\"1574\">Keep a list of common academic collocations<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1577\" data-end=\"1737\">Use the<a href=\"https:\/\/www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com\/definition\/english\/collocation\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"> Oxford Collocations Dictionary<\/a> or similar resources to check combinations<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1739\" data-end=\"1897\">And finally, trust your proofreading process. During revision, highlight prepositions and ask: <em data-start=\"1834\" data-end=\"1863\">Does this word belong here?<\/em> If it feels off, double-check it.<\/p>\n<blockquote data-start=\"1899\" data-end=\"2035\">\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1901\" data-end=\"2035\">Related reading: <a class=\"cursor-pointer\" href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/using-plain-english-in-academic-writing\/\" target=\"_new\" rel=\"noopener\" data-start=\"1918\" data-end=\"2035\">Using Plain English in Academic Writing<\/a><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<h2 class=\"\" data-start=\"75\" data-end=\"99\">5. Sentence Fragments<\/h2>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"101\" data-end=\"367\">A <strong data-start=\"103\" data-end=\"124\">sentence fragment<\/strong> is a group of words that looks like a sentence but isn\u2019t one. It\u2019s missing a subject, a verb, or a complete thought. In academic writing, fragments can interrupt the flow, confuse your reader, and make your thesis appear unfinished or rushed.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"369\" data-end=\"609\">For ESL writers, fragments often appear when trying to write more \u201cacademic-sounding\u201d sentences or when attempting to use complex structures. But sometimes, in the effort to sound formal or concise, a key part of the sentence gets left out.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"611\" data-end=\"635\">Here\u2019s a common example:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"637\" data-end=\"778\">\u274c <em data-start=\"639\" data-end=\"692\">Although the study identified significant patterns.<\/em><br data-start=\"692\" data-end=\"695\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"697\" data-end=\"778\">Although the study identified significant patterns, further analysis is needed.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"780\" data-end=\"926\">The first version sets up a dependent clause (\u201calthough&#8230;\u201d) but never finishes the idea. The reader is left waiting for the rest of the sentence.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"928\" data-end=\"944\">Another example:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"946\" data-end=\"1095\">\u274c <em data-start=\"948\" data-end=\"999\">Such as the methods used in previous experiments.<\/em><br data-start=\"999\" data-end=\"1002\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"1004\" data-end=\"1095\">This study replicates previous findings, such as the methods used in earlier experiments.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1097\" data-end=\"1242\">Fragments like this often occur when listing examples or giving explanations. Writers introduce an idea but forget to attach it to a main clause.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1244\" data-end=\"1274\">How to fix sentence fragments:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li data-start=\"1277\" data-end=\"1331\"><strong data-start=\"1277\" data-end=\"1305\">Read your sentence aloud<\/strong>\u2014does it sound complete?<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1334\" data-end=\"1495\"><strong data-start=\"1334\" data-end=\"1362\">Look for dependent words<\/strong> like although, because, since, such as, which\u2014if they\u2019re present, make sure the sentence continues with a full independent clause.<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1498\" data-end=\"1585\"><strong data-start=\"1498\" data-end=\"1551\">Check that each sentence has a subject and a verb<\/strong> and expresses a complete thought.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1587\" data-end=\"1818\">Even native English speakers make this mistake\u2014especially in early drafts. But in a thesis, fragments can damage the clarity and authority of your writing. Always revise for sentence completeness during the final stages of editing.<\/p>\n<blockquote data-start=\"1820\" data-end=\"1919\">\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1822\" data-end=\"1919\">Tip: When in doubt, combine shorter fragments with neighbouring sentences to ensure logical flow.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<h2 class=\"\" data-start=\"91\" data-end=\"131\">6. Run-On Sentences and Comma Splices<\/h2>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"133\" data-end=\"427\">Run-on sentences and comma splices are two common grammar issues that often sneak into the writing of ESL thesis writers\u2014especially when trying to connect ideas smoothly. While the intention is usually good (to sound fluent or academic), the result can be confusing and grammatically incorrect.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"429\" data-end=\"575\">A <strong data-start=\"431\" data-end=\"450\">run-on sentence<\/strong> occurs when two or more independent clauses (complete sentences) are joined without proper punctuation or a connecting word:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"577\" data-end=\"723\">\u274c <em data-start=\"579\" data-end=\"646\">The participants were interviewed the results were then analysed.<\/em><br data-start=\"646\" data-end=\"649\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"651\" data-end=\"723\">The participants were interviewed, and the results were then analysed.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"725\" data-end=\"834\">A <strong data-start=\"727\" data-end=\"743\">comma splice<\/strong> is a similar error. It happens when two independent clauses are connected only by a comma:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"836\" data-end=\"1059\">\u274c <em data-start=\"838\" data-end=\"904\">The theory is widely accepted, it is rarely applied in practice.<\/em><br data-start=\"904\" data-end=\"907\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"909\" data-end=\"984\">The theory is widely accepted. However, it is rarely applied in practice.<\/em><br data-start=\"984\" data-end=\"987\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"989\" data-end=\"1059\">The theory is widely accepted, but it is rarely applied in practice.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1061\" data-end=\"1250\">Both errors can make your writing hard to follow or appear unpolished. Fortunately, they\u2019re easy to fix once you know what to look for. You can correct a run-on sentence or comma splice by:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li data-start=\"1254\" data-end=\"1304\">Splitting the sentence into two with a full stop<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1307\" data-end=\"1359\">Using a semicolon if the ideas are closely related<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1362\" data-end=\"1424\">Adding a coordinating conjunction (e.g., <em data-start=\"1403\" data-end=\"1421\">and, but, so, or<\/em>)<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1427\" data-end=\"1479\">Restructuring the sentence into one complete thought<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1481\" data-end=\"1504\">Here\u2019s another example:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1506\" data-end=\"1759\">\u274c <em data-start=\"1508\" data-end=\"1587\">This model has been used in multiple studies, the results vary significantly.<\/em><br data-start=\"1587\" data-end=\"1590\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"1592\" data-end=\"1675\">This model has been used in multiple studies, but the results vary significantly.<\/em><br data-start=\"1675\" data-end=\"1678\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"1680\" data-end=\"1759\">This model has been used in multiple studies. The results vary significantly.<\/em><\/p>\n<blockquote data-start=\"1761\" data-end=\"1956\">\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1763\" data-end=\"1956\">Tip: When proofreading, look for long sentences with two distinct ideas. Ask yourself: \u201cCould this be split into separate sentences?\u201d If yes, you might be dealing with a run-on or comma splice.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<blockquote data-start=\"1958\" data-end=\"2080\">\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1960\" data-end=\"2080\">Related: <a class=\"cursor-pointer\" href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/how-to-proofread-a-thesis\/\" target=\"_new\" rel=\"noopener\" data-start=\"1969\" data-end=\"2080\">How to Proofread a Thesis Like a Pro<\/a><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<h2 class=\"\" data-start=\"99\" data-end=\"147\">7. Word Form Errors (e.g., affect vs. effect)<\/h2>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"149\" data-end=\"491\">Word form errors occur when the wrong grammatical form of a word is used\u2014often by confusing a noun with a verb, an adjective with an adverb, or two words that sound similar but function differently. These mistakes are particularly common among ESL writers because English vocabulary includes many lookalike words with entirely different uses.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"493\" data-end=\"532\">One of the most well-known examples is:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"534\" data-end=\"671\">\u274c <em data-start=\"536\" data-end=\"601\">The new policy had a positive <strong data-start=\"567\" data-end=\"577\">affect<\/strong> on student motivation.<\/em><br data-start=\"601\" data-end=\"604\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"606\" data-end=\"671\">The new policy had a positive <strong data-start=\"637\" data-end=\"647\">effect<\/strong> on student motivation.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"673\" data-end=\"813\">In this case, \u201ceffect\u201d is the correct <strong data-start=\"711\" data-end=\"719\">noun<\/strong>\u2014the result of something. \u201cAffect\u201d is typically used as a <strong data-start=\"777\" data-end=\"785\">verb<\/strong> (to influence), not a noun.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"815\" data-end=\"838\">Another common mistake:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"840\" data-end=\"950\">\u274c <em data-start=\"842\" data-end=\"894\">The researchers aimed to <strong data-start=\"868\" data-end=\"880\">analysis<\/strong> the results.<\/em><br data-start=\"894\" data-end=\"897\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"899\" data-end=\"950\">The researchers aimed to <strong data-start=\"925\" data-end=\"936\">analyse<\/strong> the results.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"952\" data-end=\"1028\">Here, \u201canalysis\u201d is a <strong data-start=\"974\" data-end=\"982\">noun<\/strong>, but the sentence needs a <strong data-start=\"1009\" data-end=\"1017\">verb<\/strong>\u2014\u201canalyse.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1030\" data-end=\"1064\">Let\u2019s look at a few more examples:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1066\" data-end=\"1180\">\u274c <em data-start=\"1068\" data-end=\"1120\">This method is very <strong data-start=\"1089\" data-end=\"1096\">use<\/strong> in practical settings.<\/em><br data-start=\"1120\" data-end=\"1123\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"1125\" data-end=\"1180\">This method is very <strong data-start=\"1146\" data-end=\"1156\">useful<\/strong> in practical settings.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1182\" data-end=\"1302\">\u274c <em data-start=\"1184\" data-end=\"1240\">The team conducted a <strong data-start=\"1206\" data-end=\"1218\">detailed<\/strong> analyse of the data.<\/em><br data-start=\"1240\" data-end=\"1243\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"1245\" data-end=\"1302\">The team conducted a <strong data-start=\"1267\" data-end=\"1288\">detailed analysis<\/strong> of the data.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1304\" data-end=\"1475\">These errors can confuse readers and interrupt the flow of your argument. They also tend to make your writing feel less fluent or academic\u2014even when your ideas are strong.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1477\" data-end=\"1503\">To avoid word form errors:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li data-start=\"1506\" data-end=\"1609\">Learn the most common academic word families (e.g., <em data-start=\"1558\" data-end=\"1606\">analyse \/ analysis \/ analytical \/ analytically<\/em>)<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1612\" data-end=\"1713\">Use tools like <a class=\"\" href=\"https:\/\/www.grammarly.com\/\" target=\"_new\" rel=\"noopener\" data-start=\"1627\" data-end=\"1666\">Grammarly<\/a> or a good academic dictionary to check usage<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1716\" data-end=\"1829\">During proofreading, highlight key academic terms and double-check you\u2019re using the correct form for the sentence<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2 class=\"\" data-start=\"76\" data-end=\"101\">8. Misplaced Modifiers<\/h2>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"103\" data-end=\"347\">A <strong data-start=\"105\" data-end=\"117\">modifier<\/strong> is a word or phrase that provides more information about another word in a sentence. A <strong data-start=\"205\" data-end=\"227\">misplaced modifier<\/strong> happens when that information is in the wrong place\u2014making the sentence confusing or, sometimes, unintentionally funny.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"349\" data-end=\"572\">These errors are especially common in academic writing by ESL students because English word order is strict and not always intuitive. When a modifier is in the wrong spot, it can make it unclear <strong data-start=\"544\" data-end=\"552\">what<\/strong> is being described.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"574\" data-end=\"606\">Let\u2019s take a look at an example:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"608\" data-end=\"839\">\u274c <em data-start=\"610\" data-end=\"686\">The student submitted the assignment to the professor that was incomplete.<\/em><br data-start=\"686\" data-end=\"689\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"691\" data-end=\"758\">The student submitted the incomplete assignment to the professor.<\/em><br data-start=\"758\" data-end=\"761\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"763\" data-end=\"839\">The student submitted the assignment that was incomplete to the professor.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"841\" data-end=\"996\">In the incorrect version, it sounds like the professor was incomplete, not the assignment! The confusion comes from the placement of \u201cthat was incomplete.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"998\" data-end=\"1014\">Another example:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1016\" data-end=\"1125\">\u274c <em data-start=\"1018\" data-end=\"1069\">Nearly the professor received 100 emails per day.<\/em><br data-start=\"1069\" data-end=\"1072\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"1074\" data-end=\"1125\">The professor received nearly 100 emails per day.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1127\" data-end=\"1283\">Here, the word \u201cnearly\u201d is modifying \u201cthe professor\u201d instead of \u201c100 emails.\u201d While the sentence is short, the meaning changes entirely based on word order.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1285\" data-end=\"1318\">How to avoid misplaced modifiers:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li data-start=\"1321\" data-end=\"1385\">Place modifiers as close as possible to the word they describe<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1388\" data-end=\"1455\">Reread your sentence and ask, <em data-start=\"1418\" data-end=\"1453\">\u201cWhat is this phrase describing?\u201d<\/em><\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1458\" data-end=\"1534\">If it\u2019s unclear or accidentally humorous, it likely needs to be repositioned<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1536\" data-end=\"1705\">Correct modifier placement makes your writing easier to follow and helps ensure your reader interprets your meaning as intended\u2014especially in complex academic arguments.<\/p>\n<blockquote data-start=\"1707\" data-end=\"1796\">\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1709\" data-end=\"1796\">Tip: Reading aloud slowly often helps you hear misplaced modifiers before you see them.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<h2 class=\"\" data-start=\"75\" data-end=\"99\">9. Parallel Structure<\/h2>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"101\" data-end=\"470\"><strong data-start=\"101\" data-end=\"123\">Parallel structure<\/strong>\u2014also known as parallelism\u2014is the grammatical practice of keeping similar sentence elements in the same format. This is especially important when you&#8217;re writing lists, comparing ideas, or outlining multiple actions. Inconsistent structure can make sentences sound awkward, unbalanced, or unclear\u2014something that often goes unnoticed by ESL writers.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"472\" data-end=\"533\">Here\u2019s an example of a sentence with poor parallel structure:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"535\" data-end=\"788\">\u274c <em data-start=\"537\" data-end=\"657\">The goals of this thesis are to explore cultural influences, analysing social dynamics, and how media shapes identity.<\/em><br data-start=\"657\" data-end=\"660\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"662\" data-end=\"788\">The goals of this thesis are to explore cultural influences, analyse social dynamics, and examine how media shapes identity.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"790\" data-end=\"978\">In the corrected version, each item in the list begins with the <strong data-start=\"854\" data-end=\"867\">to + verb<\/strong> structure: <em data-start=\"879\" data-end=\"915\">to explore, to analyse, to examine<\/em>. This makes the sentence easier to read and more professional.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"980\" data-end=\"1010\">Here\u2019s another common example:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1012\" data-end=\"1233\">\u274c <em data-start=\"1014\" data-end=\"1122\">The researcher was responsible for collecting data, reviewing the literature, and the analysis of results.<\/em><br data-start=\"1122\" data-end=\"1125\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"1127\" data-end=\"1233\">The researcher was responsible for collecting data, reviewing the literature, and analysing the results.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1235\" data-end=\"1367\">Mixing verb forms (e.g., \u201ccollecting,\u201d \u201creviewing,\u201d and \u201cthe analysis\u201d) disrupts the rhythm and weakens the clarity of your writing.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1369\" data-end=\"1415\">Parallel structure is especially important in:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li data-start=\"1418\" data-end=\"1442\">Lists or bullet points<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1445\" data-end=\"1505\">Sentences using coordinating conjunctions (<em data-start=\"1488\" data-end=\"1502\">and, or, but<\/em>)<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1508\" data-end=\"1545\">Thesis statements and research aims. Check out our <a href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/free-thesis-statement-generator\/\">free thesis statement generator<\/a> for help with this.<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1548\" data-end=\"1572\">Headings and subheadings<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1574\" data-end=\"1600\">To fix parallel structure:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li data-start=\"1603\" data-end=\"1689\">Identify the pattern (e.g., all verbs, all nouns) and make sure each element matches<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1692\" data-end=\"1779\">Avoid mixing gerunds (<em data-start=\"1714\" data-end=\"1720\">-ing<\/em> forms) with infinitives or noun phrases in the same list<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1782\" data-end=\"1852\">Read each item separately to check if it sounds grammatically complete<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1854\" data-end=\"2032\">Maintaining parallelism not only improves grammar\u2014it also enhances clarity, logic, and flow. In academic writing, this can make a big difference to how your argument is received.<\/p>\n<blockquote data-start=\"2034\" data-end=\"2173\">\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"2036\" data-end=\"2173\">Related: <a class=\"cursor-pointer\" href=\"https:\/\/www.vappingo.com\/word-blog\/structuring-your-thesis-a-step-by-step-guide\/\" target=\"_new\" rel=\"noopener\" data-start=\"2045\" data-end=\"2173\">Structuring Your Thesis<\/a><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<h2 class=\"\" data-start=\"130\" data-end=\"170\">10. Incorrect Use of Relative Clauses<\/h2>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"172\" data-end=\"470\"><strong data-start=\"172\" data-end=\"192\">Relative clauses<\/strong>\u2014those beginning with <em data-start=\"214\" data-end=\"247\">who, which, that, whose, where,<\/em> and <em data-start=\"252\" data-end=\"258\">when<\/em>\u2014are used to add extra information about a noun. While they\u2019re useful for building more detailed, academic-sounding sentences, they can cause problems if they\u2019re misused, mispunctuated, or incorrectly structured.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"472\" data-end=\"496\">Here\u2019s a common mistake:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"498\" data-end=\"660\">\u274c <em data-start=\"500\" data-end=\"577\">The survey, which was conducted among 200 participants revealed key trends.<\/em><br data-start=\"577\" data-end=\"580\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"582\" data-end=\"660\">The survey, which was conducted among 200 participants, revealed key trends.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"662\" data-end=\"905\">In the incorrect version, the relative clause is missing commas, which creates a confusing sentence. Relative clauses are divided into two types: <strong data-start=\"808\" data-end=\"820\">defining<\/strong> (essential to the meaning of the sentence) and <strong data-start=\"868\" data-end=\"884\">non-defining<\/strong> (extra information).<\/p>\n<ul data-start=\"907\" data-end=\"1136\">\n<li class=\"\" data-start=\"907\" data-end=\"1024\">\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"909\" data-end=\"1024\"><strong data-start=\"909\" data-end=\"941\">Defining clause (no commas):<\/strong><br data-start=\"941\" data-end=\"944\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"948\" data-end=\"1022\">The participants who completed the survey were included in the analysis.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<li class=\"\" data-start=\"1025\" data-end=\"1136\">\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1027\" data-end=\"1136\"><strong data-start=\"1027\" data-end=\"1064\">Non-defining clause (use commas):<\/strong><br data-start=\"1064\" data-end=\"1067\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"1071\" data-end=\"1136\">The survey, which was conducted online, received 200 responses.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1138\" data-end=\"1208\">Another common ESL error involves choosing the wrong relative pronoun:<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1210\" data-end=\"1318\">\u274c <em data-start=\"1212\" data-end=\"1262\">The article who explains the theory is outdated.<\/em><br data-start=\"1262\" data-end=\"1265\" \/>\u2705 <em data-start=\"1267\" data-end=\"1318\">The article that explains the theory is outdated.<\/em><\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1320\" data-end=\"1514\">\u201cWho\u201d is used for people, while \u201cthat\u201d or \u201cwhich\u201d should be used for things. These small distinctions are easy to miss\u2014but they\u2019re important for maintaining accuracy and fluency in your writing.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1516\" data-end=\"1543\">To master relative clauses:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li data-start=\"1546\" data-end=\"1630\">Learn when to use commas (non-defining clauses) and when not to (defining clauses)<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1633\" data-end=\"1737\">Use \u201cwho\u201d for people, \u201cwhich\u201d for non-essential clauses about things, and \u201cthat\u201d for essential clauses<\/li>\n<li data-start=\"1740\" data-end=\"1829\">Make sure the relative clause is directly next to the noun it modifies to avoid ambiguity<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<blockquote data-start=\"1831\" data-end=\"1977\">\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1833\" data-end=\"1977\">Bonus tip: If your sentence feels overly long or confusing with a relative clause, break it into two. Clarity is more important than complexity.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<h2 class=\"\" data-start=\"83\" data-end=\"114\">Final Tips and Encouragement<\/h2>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"116\" data-end=\"601\">If English isn\u2019t your first language, writing a full academic thesis can feel like climbing a mountain\u2014but grammar doesn\u2019t have to be your stumbling block. The issues we\u2019ve covered\u2014subject-verb agreement, articles, tense consistency, prepositions, fragments, run-ons, word forms, modifiers, parallel structure, and relative clauses\u2014are some of the most common traps for ESL writers. The good news is that they\u2019re all fixable, and every mistake is an opportunity to improve your skills.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"603\" data-end=\"990\">Remember, strong writing doesn\u2019t mean perfect grammar from the first draft. It means being open to revising, learning from feedback, and improving over time. Read your thesis aloud. Use helpful tools like <a class=\"\" href=\"https:\/\/www.grammarly.com\/\" target=\"_new\" rel=\"noopener\" data-start=\"808\" data-end=\"847\">Grammarly<\/a>, but don\u2019t rely on them completely. Ask others to review your work if possible, and don\u2019t hesitate to seek professional help when you need it.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"992\" data-end=\"1359\">At Vappingo, we specialise in <a class=\"cursor-pointer\" target=\"_new\" rel=\"noopener\" data-start=\"1022\" data-end=\"1163\">Thesis Proofreading for Non-Native English Speakers<\/a>. Our editors understand the unique challenges ESL writers face, and we\u2019re here to help you express your ideas clearly, confidently, and correctly\u2014without rewriting your work or losing your voice.<\/p>\n<p class=\"\" data-start=\"1361\" data-end=\"1596\">You\u2019ve done the research. You\u2019ve written the chapters. Now it\u2019s time to present your ideas with clarity and polish. With a careful eye and a little support, your thesis can be a true reflection of your hard work and academic potential.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Writing a thesis in English as a second language is a remarkable achievement\u2014but it can also feel overwhelming. You\u2019ve done the hard work: researching your topic, analysing your data, and developing your ideas. But when it comes to writing it all down, even strong research can be undermined by simple grammar mistakes. 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